I feel like Luke’s patriotic aspect gives a unique take on the archetype of “the guy who hides his insecurities behind extreme promiscuity”. I do, however, feel as if that detracts from his character a bit because that basically is his personality and it’s what most of his dialogue and actions are based around. There’s just kind of a half-empty archetype with a bit of a backstory. I do feel like if his personality is fleshed out a bit more and the MC has a chance to delve into his thoughts and behavior and such (maybe get him drunk and have a candid conversation or something like that), he will definitely be a compelling character.
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